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(Name) quietly scribbled on her notebook. A huge smile was on her face. Feliciano , her father , was right beside her. His eyes were misty , filled with tears that are about to fall.
Pain and bitterness filled his heart , but seeing his precious (Name)'s smile washed them off.
The young girl coughed and wheezed. Worry was written all over Feliciano's face. Quickly rushing to her side he gently stroked her back , making her feel some relief. "A-are you'a okay bella?". (Name) looked at him , a faint smile on her face. "Si papa.. I'm okay". Feliciano sighed , still rubbing her back. (Name) exhaled and continued drawing. The Italian stood up
and walked towards the window. Slowly wiping of the tears that escaped his eyes. Seeing his only angel , suffering such dreadful illness was too much for the usual cheerful man to bear.

"Papa! Papa! Look what I drew! Its you!". An energetic (Name) says showing her drawing
to Feliciano. "Vee~! That's amazing (Name)! You're a really good artist bella". he beamed
ruffling her hair. "Did you really like it papa?". The Italian chuckled as he picked her up.
"Of course!". (Name) cheered and hugged his neck. "Ti Amo papa~!".  
"Ti amo troppo mia bambina~!". He says kissing her cheek.

"Is'a anything else you'a could do for my bambina d-doctor..?". A really worried
Feliciano asked. "I'm sorry Mr. Vargas but.. It's too late. She only has a few months
to live. We tried. Please excuse me". the doctor says as he left. (Name) coughed
violently "'s going on..?". she stuttered. Her (e/c) eyes filled with deep
sadness , locking contact with Feliciano's brown ones. "It's gonna be alright (Name)..! You just'a have to stay strong okay? For papa..?". Feliciano whispers , his voice cracked a bit. "Okay papa..I will...". (Name) says smiling before passing out. Feliciano gripped her hand tight. "Stay strong (Name)..."

"Stay strong...".

"Papa?". Feliciano turned his attention to the small girl who was still coughing a bit.
"Are you okay?". she asked. "Si I'ma okay bella!". He faked a smile.
(Name) smiled and continued her little drawing.  He slowly walked toward her. "What are you'a drawing (Name)?".  The little girl grinned "You'll see it soon papa, it's a surprise!". she cheerfully exclaimed. Feliciano smiled "Alright (Name)". She coughed again , squinting in the pain. Feliciano rushed to her side again , comforting her. Her ailment is getting worst. (Name) stopped coughing , gazing at her father's eyes.  Tears streamed down his cheeks , she noticed this and gripped his hand tightly , smiling. "Papa..please don't cry". (Name) whispers. Feliciano blinked and giggled softly. "I look like total mess'a huh (Name)?". (Name) giggled and hugged him , he hugged her back , tears still streaming down his face.
The phone rang ,interrupting the two. Feliciano sighed "I'll be right back bella". (Name) nodded and continued her little drawing. As she worked on her masterpiece she could feel
herself slipping away slowly.

-Time skip to 20 minutes later-

(Name) finally puts the finishing touches to her drawing. "And done! Perfect-". (Name)
coughed and wheezed. She finally stopped and looked at her drawing.  Tears rolled down her eyes. How she wished she could stay longer , just to be with him. (Name) wrote something on the back of the paper. As she wrote the final letter of one of the words. Her eyes began to feel heavy. Her breathing slowing down. (Name) slowly fell onto the bed , smiling as she thought about being with Feliciano. The time he found her and took her in his home , the time they played together , all those times when everything was just so happy. (Name) coughed and coughed , only stopped when she breathed her last.
"Ti amo....papa...."

-Time skip to 10 minutes after that-

Feliciano hung up the phone. It was his friend Ludwig calling him , discussing some important matter. He walked to (Name)'s room finding her "sleeping". Her peaceful expression made his heart flutter. Feliciano noticed her drawing that she was working on all day. He picked it up and his expression darkened. His heart ached. It was a picture of him and (Name) at the park. "Mia bambina....". He flipped over to the back.

 I hope you like this drawing Papa! This was us when we were in the park.
   You know  , where you found me!
   I wish I could stay longer. I don't want to leave you Papa. I am so happy that I
   have a really loving father. I love you Papa. I'll be waiting for you.

   Love (Name)

Feliciano glanced at her. He was already crying. "Papa anche tu il mio tesoro ama..". He went closer and caressed her cheek. He noticed it felt cold. When he examined more , he began shaking her limp body. "(N-Name)?! (Name)! Please'a wake up. Please! D-don't'a do this to m-me..!". His voice was filled with agony and worry. Eyes wet with tears. "(Name)! (Name)!! Mia bambina...! Il mio unico tesoro..". Feliciano sobbed over his daughter's lifeless body. Slowly picked her up , embracing her. "Ti amo...(Name)..I will never forget about you...".

-5 years later-

Feliciano sighed in content. He and his wife were already settled in their new house.
"Honey can you please bring this box to the attic?". he heard her say. "Of course bella~!". he said in his usual cheerful manner. She smiled and went her way to their room.
The Italian slowly took out all the things from the box. Then he came across a very familiar picture. It was a picture of (Name) and him. Attached to it was (Name)'s final drawing , the one she died doing. Feliciano sadly smiled and hugged the picture. Its been 5 years since her death. Even if alot happened in his life he never ever forgot about her.
"I miss you so much my (Name)...I hope you're happy..where ever you are..Papa loves you so much". He gave a slight kiss on the picture before placing it inside a small frame.
Just then his wife came in. "Feli? Is everything alright?". He turned around smiling a bit. "Oh'a everything's fine mi amore~!". She smiled and embraced him. "Oh umm.. I forgot to ask you..what should we name our baby girl?". She asked rubbing her slightly bloated stomach. Feliciano glanced at the picture , smiling genuinely. "I know..".

"We should call her... (Name)".
Yus! It'sa done! I thought about this during a rainy day and rainy days make me think about really depressing stuff. THEN BOOM! This!

Dont ask who Feli's wife is.. believe me.. I don't know myself.. (I will find her and tell her to NEVER EVER BREAK HIS HEART OR EVEN DARE LEAVE HIM AND READER-CHAN *being held back by Germany* ASFDFDDHDKJKL)

Ti amo- I love you
Ti amo troppo - I love you too
Mia bambina - My baby girl
Il mio unico tesoro - My only treasure
Papa anche tu il mio tesoro ama- Papa loves you too
mi amore- my love

Soooo yeah~! ^^
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Kuroi-Roze-Seikyo Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2015
I think it was a really good story, however, I personally dislike the fact that Feli named his new daughter (Y/N), because not only is the name already taken, even if reader IS dead, but also, it feels a bit like the baby is a replacement for reader. I know a lot would beg to differ, but this is just how I personally feel. Other than that, though, I thoroughly enjoyed this piece, and I can't wait to read more of your works! You are a truly gifted author! :)
KawaiiKittenLover Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
S-so amazing...
Ti amo!!
C'est belle!
I like too many languages...
Great job, mon amie
MabelHyuga75 Featured By Owner Edited Aug 6, 2015  New Deviant
Oww, your fanfic was amazing and very touching.
hjsanchez82 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2015  New Deviant Student Artist
*cries so hard* Oh my gosh I cried so hard! It gets me every time!! Wonderful story!~
...So sad...😭😢
VinylSushi Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2015
In the end...He just replaced me...
ChaosTheCat Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Digital Artist
I was replaced too there there we shall be replacement buddies ;-;
VinylSushi Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2015
laurenbravo Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2015
This is beautiful. I have tears streaming down my face.Britney Spears Crying Yes 
JadaIsMe Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
so sad but perfect!
creepypeople Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
This is an amazing story, I found it very cute and touching, but Three are actually a few mista le in the sentences that Italy says:
Even thinking that "Mia bambina" is not fully wrong the correct version is "Bambina mia" because in Italian the noun come before the adjective
"Ti amo troppo" could be "Ti voglio bene anche io"
"Papa anche tu il mio tesoro ama" is fully incorrect. The right version is
"Anche tu sei il mio tesoro, il Papà ti vuole bene".
In Italian "I love you" could be traslated in Two ways
"ti voglio bene" who could be said by a father and a daughter or between two friends.
"ti amo" is more said between two lovers.
However, i loved this story!
Sorry for my English but i'm italian, so yeah!
Otaku-Gawa Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
It is five in le Morning.  I'm worried my sobs will awaken my friend.  
Piper15 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
This makes me cry every time!! Q~Q WHY!! Cry forever Miuna Crying Icon Chisaki Crying Icon Romano (Cries) [V4] 
kittyXD9009 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
It's so touching!! I'm on the verge of tears!
AmericanDayDream Featured By Owner May 24, 2015
There was this girl once named Clarissa. She lived in an mental asylum for killing her parents. One day she killed all the staff. The more government put a machine that would kill her. It went ring and killed her slowly. Post this on ten different places on this website. If you don't on 12:00 am monday she'll come and kill you in a slow painful death.
KawaiiKittenLover Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Well then it's a good thing I don't mind death.
Hetagirl195 Featured By Owner May 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Crying Mako Five Nights at Freddy's - Crying Child Jake crying plz SpongeBob (Cries) Big Fool Emoji-07 (Cry) [V2] Gross Sobbing 
zebraqueen098 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
i must not cry because elliot will laugh *tries to not cry but explodes*
YukiSatomi Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The feels hit me hard...-covers my face and tries not to let out a sob- GOOD STORY! 
Nuttelaaddict44 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
So sad Sad dummy . I love it tho!
GamerGirl62 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Almost made me cry. I can't really cry now, cuz my parents'll notice xD
sunset30 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015
Italy Chibi (Crying) [V4] Asuna Crying Icon  So sad but really cute (reader-chan shal always be remaberd)
goddesskid Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2015
Killerdonut28 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015
Oh how could you
coolgrl1234 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2015
Neko Emoji-14 (Cry) [V1] HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO MEEEEEEH!Cry run 
EraOfTheChibi Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
I said I would hate you if I died after I finished the drawing. I hate you. Good job man.
DarkRoseStayla1 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Enderchild Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

I'm fucking crying over here man.

From a short story.
U r both amazing and evil.
I hate you and I love you.
theotakugurl Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2015  Student General Artist
makaylea Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
my feels oh my tomatos !!!!
coolcartoonanimefan Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015
RaymanGirl6 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2015
Jada-chan456 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015  Student Digital Artist
I am actually crying right now, the tears won't stop help!! WAAAAAAA!!
chica105 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
It's so sad'''BUTS BEAUTIFUL waaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh *blows nose on a sock*...I had no tissues
loulouh2o Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
I think naming your new child after one dies isn't right, but its still good
 Miuna Crying Icon France (Crying) [V3] Romano (Cries) [V4] 
DinoKittyAndWolfGang Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014
why is it fanfics is one of the only things that can make me cry.. this one was sad like i was almost sobbing.. Pyong Cry  good job tho
BluBerryMasqurade Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
SCREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE *Flips a table because I feel like my hearts been ripped out and I only accept happiness* NO. NO. I AM NOT OKAY WITH THIS.
Deathnote9718468 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014  Student General Artist
Who's your wife?!!APH Belarus Senpai Notice Me 
crankycobra Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ok, good. I'm not the only one who feels like I need to murder that 'wife' of his. I feel betrayed, all I mean to him is another woman's child. That kid would be a replacement.
APH Russia Sulk Icon #2 - Voldemort smile (Harry Potter)  The Sound Of...... 
Deathnote9718468 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2015  Student General Artist
Golden Freddy Icon GIF - Five Nights at Freddy's Chainsword emoticon murder Gangster fella (Actions) Frog Emoji-42 (Killer) [V3] Pixel Art - Cute murderer Five Nights at Freddy's 2 - Mangle Foxy - Icon GIF Five Nights at Freddys 2 - Mangle Foxy 2 -Icon GIF Chica Emoticon Icon GIF - Five Nights at Freddy's Five Nights at Freddy's 2 - Marionette - Icon GIF Swiggity Swooty, Foxy's Comin 4 Booty (Chat Icon) Foxy Emoticon Chasing - Five Nights at Freddy's FNAF FAXY FNAF Killer Fan Rage Intensifies (Chat Icon) Five Nights at Freddy's 2 - Old Chica - Icon GIF Five Nights at Freddy's 2 - Toy Chica - Icon GIF Five Nights at Freddy's 2 - Purple Man - Icon GIF Five Nights at Freddy's 2 - Old Freddy - Icon GIF Five Nights at Freddys 2 - Endoskeleton - Icon GIF Five Nights at Freddy's 2 - Golden Freddy - Icon Five Nights at Freddy's 2 Shadow Freddy - Icon GIF Bonnie Nom the Fnaf fandom Five Nights at Freddy's 2 Shadow Bonnie - Icon GIF Freddy is .... Twerking? (Chat Icon) Bonnie Bruh Chat Icon still not ready 4 freddy Chica's Nope Door Chat Icon Five Nights at Freddy's 2- New Bonnie - Icon GIF Five Nights at Freddy's 2 - Mini Cupcake -Icon GIF Bonnie (FNAF) Five Nights at Freddy's 2 - The Puppet - Icon GIF Freddy Intensifies Box of Kawaii Bonnie Overload!! (Chat Icon) 
crankycobra Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Asuna Knife Icon HaHaHaHaHaHaHa ' Kiara annoying NOPE Cat fail jump Cat Bread Face Cat nods Oh yess can't touch this llama stare 
HNNNGGGG im fabulous Sexy horse (oh noes) haha no 
Im gonna go kill italy. It is my mission.
Deathnote9718468 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2015  Student General Artist
Thank You!PewDiePie - Wat 
crankycobra Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your welcome my beautiful~plz yeeeeeeeeeees? 
Deathnote9718468 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2015  Student General Artist
*blushes then smiles* Hatsune Miku-06 (Smile) 
crankycobra Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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AHHHH! ITS BELARUS!!!! *hides* Scared 
Deathnote9718468 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014  Student General Artist
Tokyo- *tries to her down* Daijobu...
Mew-Blueberry12 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
WAHHHHHHHH !!!!!! THE FEEELS !!!!!! I love this SOOO much !!!! <3
JackFleutie Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2014  Student General Artist
Im a crying meses right now he he........WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA !!!!! Why...! WHY!!!
cancerleovirgo Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
hazelwolf23 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
*tears pouring like water fountain*  THAT'S SO SAD!!!! TT^TT *starts crying into papa Spain's chest*
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