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(Name) quietly scribbled on her notebook. A huge smile was on her face. Feliciano , her father , was right beside her. His eyes were misty , filled with tears that are about to fall.
Pain and bitterness filled his heart , but seeing his precious (Name)'s smile washed them off.
The young girl coughed and wheezed. Worry was written all over Feliciano's face. Quickly rushing to her side he gently stroked her back , making her feel some relief. "A-are you'a okay bella?". (Name) looked at him , a faint smile on her face. "Si papa.. I'm okay". Feliciano sighed , still rubbing her back. (Name) exhaled and continued drawing. The Italian stood up
and walked towards the window. Slowly wiping of the tears that escaped his eyes. Seeing his only angel , suffering such dreadful illness was too much for the usual cheerful man to bear.


"Papa! Papa! Look what I drew! Its you!". An energetic (Name) says showing her drawing
to Feliciano. "Vee~! That's amazing (Name)! You're a really good artist bella". he beamed
ruffling her hair. "Did you really like it papa?". The Italian chuckled as he picked her up.
"Of course!". (Name) cheered and hugged his neck. "Ti Amo papa~!".  
"Ti amo troppo mia bambina~!". He says kissing her cheek.





"Is'a anything else you'a could do for my bambina d-doctor..?". A really worried
Feliciano asked. "I'm sorry Mr. Vargas but.. It's too late. She only has a few months
to live. We tried. Please excuse me". the doctor says as he left. (Name) coughed
violently "Pa...pa..wh-what's going on..?". she stuttered. Her (e/c) eyes filled with deep
sadness , locking contact with Feliciano's brown ones. "It's gonna be alright (Name)..! You just'a have to stay strong okay? For papa..?". Feliciano whispers , his voice cracked a bit. "Okay papa..I will...". (Name) says smiling before passing out. Feliciano gripped her hand tight. "Stay strong (Name)..."



"Stay strong...".








"Papa?". Feliciano turned his attention to the small girl who was still coughing a bit.
"Are you okay?". she asked. "Si I'ma okay bella!". He faked a smile.
(Name) smiled and continued her little drawing.  He slowly walked toward her. "What are you'a drawing (Name)?".  The little girl grinned "You'll see it soon papa, it's a surprise!". she cheerfully exclaimed. Feliciano smiled "Alright (Name)". She coughed again , squinting in the pain. Feliciano rushed to her side again , comforting her. Her ailment is getting worst. (Name) stopped coughing , gazing at her father's eyes.  Tears streamed down his cheeks , she noticed this and gripped his hand tightly , smiling. "Papa..please don't cry". (Name) whispers. Feliciano blinked and giggled softly. "I look like total mess'a huh (Name)?". (Name) giggled and hugged him , he hugged her back , tears still streaming down his face.
The phone rang ,interrupting the two. Feliciano sighed "I'll be right back bella". (Name) nodded and continued her little drawing. As she worked on her masterpiece she could feel
herself slipping away slowly.



-Time skip to 20 minutes later-

(Name) finally puts the finishing touches to her drawing. "And done! Perfect-". (Name)
coughed and wheezed. She finally stopped and looked at her drawing.  Tears rolled down her eyes. How she wished she could stay longer , just to be with him. (Name) wrote something on the back of the paper. As she wrote the final letter of one of the words. Her eyes began to feel heavy. Her breathing slowing down. (Name) slowly fell onto the bed , smiling as she thought about being with Feliciano. The time he found her and took her in his home , the time they played together , all those times when everything was just so happy. (Name) coughed and coughed , only stopped when she breathed her last.
"Ti amo....papa...."


-Time skip to 10 minutes after that-

Feliciano hung up the phone. It was his friend Ludwig calling him , discussing some important matter. He walked to (Name)'s room finding her "sleeping". Her peaceful expression made his heart flutter. Feliciano noticed her drawing that she was working on all day. He picked it up and his expression darkened. His heart ached. It was a picture of him and (Name) at the park. "Mia bambina....". He flipped over to the back.

 I hope you like this drawing Papa! This was us when we were in the park.
   You know  , where you found me!
 
   I wish I could stay longer. I don't want to leave you Papa. I am so happy that I
   have a really loving father. I love you Papa. I'll be waiting for you.
   

   Love (Name)


Feliciano glanced at her. He was already crying. "Papa anche tu il mio tesoro ama..". He went closer and caressed her cheek. He noticed it felt cold. When he examined more , he began shaking her limp body. "(N-Name)?! (Name)! Please'a wake up. Please! D-don't'a do this to m-me..!". His voice was filled with agony and worry. Eyes wet with tears. "(Name)! (Name)!! Mia bambina...! Il mio unico tesoro..". Feliciano sobbed over his daughter's lifeless body. Slowly picked her up , embracing her. "Ti amo...(Name)..I will never forget about you...".






-5 years later-

Feliciano sighed in content. He and his wife were already settled in their new house.
"Honey can you please bring this box to the attic?". he heard her say. "Of course bella~!". he said in his usual cheerful manner. She smiled and went her way to their room.
The Italian slowly took out all the things from the box. Then he came across a very familiar picture. It was a picture of (Name) and him. Attached to it was (Name)'s final drawing , the one she died doing. Feliciano sadly smiled and hugged the picture. Its been 5 years since her death. Even if alot happened in his life he never ever forgot about her.
"I miss you so much my (Name)...I hope you're happy..where ever you are..Papa loves you so much". He gave a slight kiss on the picture before placing it inside a small frame.
Just then his wife came in. "Feli? Is everything alright?". He turned around smiling a bit. "Oh'a everything's fine mi amore~!". She smiled and embraced him. "Oh umm.. I forgot to ask you..what should we name our baby girl?". She asked rubbing her slightly bloated stomach. Feliciano glanced at the picture , smiling genuinely. "I know..".



"We should call her... (Name)".
Yus! It'sa done! I thought about this during a rainy day and rainy days make me think about really depressing stuff. THEN BOOM! This!

Dont ask who Feli's wife is.. believe me.. I don't know myself.. (I will find her and tell her to NEVER EVER BREAK HIS HEART OR EVEN DARE LEAVE HIM AND READER-CHAN *being held back by Germany* ASFDFDDHDKJKL)

Translations:
Ti amo- I love you
Ti amo troppo - I love you too
Mia bambina - My baby girl
Il mio unico tesoro - My only treasure
Papa anche tu il mio tesoro ama- Papa loves you too
mi amore- my love

Soooo yeah~! ^^
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Edit 7/5/13
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Edit 7/20/13
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:iconenderchild:
Enderchild Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
;-;

I'm fucking crying over here man.

From a short story.
U r both amazing and evil.
I hate you and I love you.
Eahggdbrjidnemske.
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theotakugurl Featured By Owner 1 day ago  New member Student General Artist
THE FEELS!
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:iconmakaylea:
makaylea Featured By Owner 6 days ago  New member Hobbyist Photographer
my feels oh my tomatos !!!!
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coolcartoonanimefan Featured By Owner 6 days ago
WAAAAA TO MANY FEELS
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RaymanGirl6 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2015  New member
DA FEELZ!  SOMEONE GET ME A BOX OF TISSUES!  HURRY!  THE TEARS ARE COMING!
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Jada-chan456 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015  Student Digital Artist
I am actually crying right now, the tears won't stop help!! WAAAAAAA!!
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chica105 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014  New member Hobbyist Photographer
It's so sad'''BUTS BEAUTIFUL waaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh *blows nose on a sock*...I had no tissues
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loulouh2o Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014  New member Hobbyist Filmographer
I think naming your new child after one dies isn't right, but its still good
 Miuna Crying Icon France (Crying) [V3] Romano (Cries) [V4] 
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DinoKittyAndWolfGang Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014
why is it fanfics is one of the only things that can make me cry.. this one was sad like i was almost sobbing.. Pyong Cry  good job tho
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BluBerryMasqurade Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014  New member Hobbyist Artist
SCREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE *Flips a table because I feel like my hearts been ripped out and I only accept happiness* NO. NO. I AM NOT OKAY WITH THIS.
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Deathnote9718468 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014  Student General Artist
Who's your wife?!!APH Belarus Senpai Notice Me 
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AHHHH! ITS BELARUS!!!! *hides* Scared 
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:icondeathnote9718468:
Deathnote9718468 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014  Student General Artist
Tokyo- *tries to her down* Daijobu...
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Mew-Blueberry12 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
WAHHHHHHHH !!!!!! THE FEEELS !!!!!! I love this SOOO much !!!! <3
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JackFleutie Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2014  Student General Artist
Im a crying meses right now he he........WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA !!!!! Why...! WHY!!!
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:iconcancerleovirgo:
cancerleovirgo Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
so...much...fluff....and....sadness!
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:iconhazelwolf23:
hazelwolf23 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
*tears pouring like water fountain*  THAT'S SO SAD!!!! TT^TT *starts crying into papa Spain's chest*
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samisnotsmart Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:cries: ohmmigosh so sad I'm gonna cry waaaaaa
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InsaneTheStreetCat Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014  Student Artist
Oh hell no.
FRUKING NO.
YOU WILL NOT NAME A BABY AFTER ME.
NO.
THAT'S LIKE REPLACING ME.
YOU FRUCKER
DON'T YOU FRUKING DARE.
NO.
JUST NO.
I DON'T WANT TO BE REPLACED.
FRUK IT HURTSSSSSSSS
DON'T YOU EVEN DARE TO.
//Silently screaming inside
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Ferrets4ever Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
 Miuna Crying Icon  It hurts...
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Bluemoonteardrop134 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014
Awwww 😫I hate it when the reader dies it so sad now I'm crying 😢
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jliscool2013 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014  Student General Artist
Me:Dawwwwww~
Italy: wat are you a reading josie?
Me: NOTHING!!! * throws phone across the room and breaks it.*
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LittleAtlantis Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014
OMG MEH NAME IS JOJO!!! ARE YOU MEH 2P!?OMG Oh my god - OMG Spaz attack 
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Kittendream15 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WHY AM I READING THESE SAD FANFICS AT NIGHT?!
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:iconnoelvermillion987:
NoelVermillion987 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014
YOU TOO?!
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:iconkittendream15:
Kittendream15 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WHY DO WE DO THESE THINGS TO OURSELVES?!
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:iconnoelvermillion987:
NoelVermillion987 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014
I DON'T KNOW!!
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:iconkittendream15:
Kittendream15 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
QAQ WHY CAN'T WE JUST READ HAPPY STUFF AT NIGHT?!
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:iconlittleatlantis:
LittleAtlantis Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014
IDK Q^Q
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:iconkittendream15:
Kittendream15 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*HUGGLES* LET'S MAKE A VOW TO TRY AND READ ONLY HAPPY FICS
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LittleAtlantis Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014
OK~~~~~~~~
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Purpleorchids869 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014  Student General Artist
I'm crying and smiling at the same time. It's really painful.
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DJLoLzafazekie Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014
hug  I cried TT~TT 




Beautiful story!!!! :D
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Oceanialy Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
wait.
Italy named a baby girl after me  
THE Fuzz
Italy whyy
I'M HURT //Dramaticaly puts hand over my forehead
I THOUGHT YOU LOVED ME
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travelerhetalian24 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014
NOOOOOO DONT KILL MEEEEHH !!!!!!!!
LET ME STAY WITH PAPAAAAA!!! PAPAAAAA HELP-A MEEEEEE!!! T^T
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amber14703 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
IT IS NOT GOOD TO LISTEN TO
The Fray- How to save a life
WHILE READING THIS
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:iconlailabuscus:
LailaBuscus Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
YOU KILLED ME?!!!!!!!
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:iconsagexeyelessjack:
SageXEyelessJack Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014
Ghost us: *bawling*
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:iconlailabuscus:
LailaBuscus Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ghost us xD



All like


"WHY WOULD YOU KILL ME.*continues to bawl*
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:iconsagexeyelessjack:
SageXEyelessJack Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014
"MEHHHHH WE HAD SO MUCH POTENTIAL!"
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:iconlailabuscus:
LailaBuscus Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
"SO MUCH GENUINENESS WAITED TO BE RELEASED FROM OUR FIVE YEAR OLD BRAIN."
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SageXEyelessJack Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014
*flails*
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:iconlailabuscus:
LailaBuscus Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
*flails with you*
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:iconsagexeyelessjack:
SageXEyelessJack Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014
*rolls on floor* >O<
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:iconkittyninja1212:
kittyninja1212 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014
Dammit, I have tears all over my face now...
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:iconnekolovernile:
NekoLoverNile Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Student General Artist
Nooooooo!!! TT^TT
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kaorusgirlfriend Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm crying Q_Q 

Loved the story.
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:iconmydepictionoffiction:
MyDepictionOfFiction Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Dear god this is sweet, or as Germany, sveet.
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:iconhetaliapastagirl:
Hetaliapastagirl Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
DA FFEEEEEELSSS SO MUCH FEELS!!!!!!!
Such a wonderful story by the way ^-^
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AureaCoral Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm crying so hard!!!!!! So sad!!!! I'm pretty sure I'm going to cause my computer to explode with all my tears!!!!
That was really good!Llama Emoji-08 (Crying) [V1] :cry: 
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