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(Name) quietly scribbled on her notebook. A huge smile was on her face. Feliciano , her father , was right beside her. His eyes were misty , filled with tears that are about to fall.
Pain and bitterness filled his heart , but seeing his precious (Name)'s smile washed them off.
The young girl coughed and wheezed. Worry was written all over Feliciano's face. Quickly rushing to her side he gently stroked her back , making her feel some relief. "A-are you'a okay bella?". (Name) looked at him , a faint smile on her face. "Si papa.. I'm okay". Feliciano sighed , still rubbing her back. (Name) exhaled and continued drawing. The Italian stood up
and walked towards the window. Slowly wiping of the tears that escaped his eyes. Seeing his only angel , suffering such dreadful illness was too much for the usual cheerful man to bear.


"Papa! Papa! Look what I drew! Its you!". An energetic (Name) says showing her drawing
to Feliciano. "Vee~! That's amazing (Name)! You're a really good artist bella". he beamed
ruffling her hair. "Did you really like it papa?". The Italian chuckled as he picked her up.
"Of course!". (Name) cheered and hugged his neck. "Ti Amo papa~!".  
"Ti amo troppo mia bambina~!". He says kissing her cheek.





"Is'a anything else you'a could do for my bambina d-doctor..?". A really worried
Feliciano asked. "I'm sorry Mr. Vargas but.. It's too late. She only has a few months
to live. We tried. Please excuse me". the doctor says as he left. (Name) coughed
violently "Pa...pa..wh-what's going on..?". she stuttered. Her (e/c) eyes filled with deep
sadness , locking contact with Feliciano's brown ones. "It's gonna be alright (Name)..! You just'a have to stay strong okay? For papa..?". Feliciano whispers , his voice cracked a bit. "Okay papa..I will...". (Name) says smiling before passing out. Feliciano gripped her hand tight. "Stay strong (Name)..."



"Stay strong...".








"Papa?". Feliciano turned his attention to the small girl who was still coughing a bit.
"Are you okay?". she asked. "Si I'ma okay bella!". He faked a smile.
(Name) smiled and continued her little drawing.  He slowly walked toward her. "What are you'a drawing (Name)?".  The little girl grinned "You'll see it soon papa, it's a surprise!". she cheerfully exclaimed. Feliciano smiled "Alright (Name)". She coughed again , squinting in the pain. Feliciano rushed to her side again , comforting her. Her ailment is getting worst. (Name) stopped coughing , gazing at her father's eyes.  Tears streamed down his cheeks , she noticed this and gripped his hand tightly , smiling. "Papa..please don't cry". (Name) whispers. Feliciano blinked and giggled softly. "I look like total mess'a huh (Name)?". (Name) giggled and hugged him , he hugged her back , tears still streaming down his face.
The phone rang ,interrupting the two. Feliciano sighed "I'll be right back bella". (Name) nodded and continued her little drawing. As she worked on her masterpiece she could feel
herself slipping away slowly.



-Time skip to 20 minutes later-

(Name) finally puts the finishing touches to her drawing. "And done! Perfect-". (Name)
coughed and wheezed. She finally stopped and looked at her drawing.  Tears rolled down her eyes. How she wished she could stay longer , just to be with him. (Name) wrote something on the back of the paper. As she wrote the final letter of one of the words. Her eyes began to feel heavy. Her breathing slowing down. (Name) slowly fell onto the bed , smiling as she thought about being with Feliciano. The time he found her and took her in his home , the time they played together , all those times when everything was just so happy. (Name) coughed and coughed , only stopped when she breathed her last.
"Ti amo....papa...."


-Time skip to 10 minutes after that-

Feliciano hung up the phone. It was his friend Ludwig calling him , discussing some important matter. He walked to (Name)'s room finding her "sleeping". Her peaceful expression made his heart flutter. Feliciano noticed her drawing that she was working on all day. He picked it up and his expression darkened. His heart ached. It was a picture of him and (Name) at the park. "Mia bambina....". He flipped over to the back.

 I hope you like this drawing Papa! This was us when we were in the park.
   You know  , where you found me!
 
   I wish I could stay longer. I don't want to leave you Papa. I am so happy that I
   have a really loving father. I love you Papa. I'll be waiting for you.
   

   Love (Name)


Feliciano glanced at her. He was already crying. "Papa anche tu il mio tesoro ama..". He went closer and caressed her cheek. He noticed it felt cold. When he examined more , he began shaking her limp body. "(N-Name)?! (Name)! Please'a wake up. Please! D-don't'a do this to m-me..!". His voice was filled with agony and worry. Eyes wet with tears. "(Name)! (Name)!! Mia bambina...! Il mio unico tesoro..". Feliciano sobbed over his daughter's lifeless body. Slowly picked her up , embracing her. "Ti amo...(Name)..I will never forget about you...".






-5 years later-

Feliciano sighed in content. He and his wife were already settled in their new house.
"Honey can you please bring this box to the attic?". he heard her say. "Of course bella~!". he said in his usual cheerful manner. She smiled and went her way to their room.
The Italian slowly took out all the things from the box. Then he came across a very familiar picture. It was a picture of (Name) and him. Attached to it was (Name)'s final drawing , the one she died doing. Feliciano sadly smiled and hugged the picture. Its been 5 years since her death. Even if alot happened in his life he never ever forgot about her.
"I miss you so much my (Name)...I hope you're happy..where ever you are..Papa loves you so much". He gave a slight kiss on the picture before placing it inside a small frame.
Just then his wife came in. "Feli? Is everything alright?". He turned around smiling a bit. "Oh'a everything's fine mi amore~!". She smiled and embraced him. "Oh umm.. I forgot to ask you..what should we name our baby girl?". She asked rubbing her slightly bloated stomach. Feliciano glanced at the picture , smiling genuinely. "I know..".



"We should call her... (Name)".
Yus! It'sa done! I thought about this during a rainy day and rainy days make me think about really depressing stuff. THEN BOOM! This!

Dont ask who Feli's wife is.. believe me.. I don't know myself.. (I will find her and tell her to NEVER EVER BREAK HIS HEART OR EVEN DARE LEAVE HIM AND READER-CHAN *being held back by Germany* ASFDFDDHDKJKL)

Translations:
Ti amo- I love you
Ti amo troppo - I love you too
Mia bambina - My baby girl
Il mio unico tesoro - My only treasure
Papa anche tu il mio tesoro ama- Papa loves you too
mi amore- my love

Soooo yeah~! ^^
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Edit 7/5/13
This story received 54 faves. THANK YOU SO MUCH GUYS!! I LOVE YOU ALL!!
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Edit 7/20/13
This story recieved 100 faves?! :iconsurprisedpatrickplz:
Oh my!! Thank you guys!! :iconcraiplz:
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JadaWilliams Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2016  New Deviant Student General Artist
this made me cry and it takes a lot to get me to cry
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samicat224 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2016  New Deviant
DAMN IT !!!!!!!!!! I NEED TO STOP READING FANFICS THAT MAKE ME CRY !!!!!!!!Waaaah! Waaaah! 
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musicheartartist Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2016  Student Filmographer
When I read this to my big brother he cryes cause the (name) was me lol
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IAmYourAnimeSenpai Featured By Owner May 30, 2016  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
😭😭😭😭😭😭😭🍝🍝🍝 my soul! My heart! VEEEEEEEEE!!!
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pheonixdaemon Featured By Owner May 29, 2016  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
My friend recently died in front of me... And since then I have been bullied and hurt... So I tried to end it but I felt as if she was stopping me as she only lived half a life and it felt like she wanted me to live on for her. I no longer cut but instead I live on and by that she   lives on,in my heart... 
My firend was called zodia after the zodiac and she died at the age of 14 with internal and external bleeding 

it is my fault she is not here and I live with the guilt of it for the rest of my life but if I see her in my next life I will be the one who protects her not the other way around...sorry if this comment gets you guys upset but I have been dealing with the pain for about 3 weeks now and I needed to say it just to make me feel better,it is easier to post things like this online as you don't know anyone properly like u do your friends
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Kittenfire22 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
PAPA!!!!! NUUU!!!!!!!! 


THE POWER OF PASTA SHOULD HAVE HEALED MEH!!!!

is it because I'm Southern Italian and not northern?!? 
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Wish-I-Was-Finnish Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I don't see them naming their child the reader's name as a replacement, I see it as a reincarnation. A second chance. As poor reader's life was cut too short. I think their soul will live on as their child.
So, in a way, that's sort of a happy ending.
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miragewarrior Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
That was beautiful...


and it's okay, I didn't need my heart-
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Firelove355 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2016  Student Writer
IM RECARNIATEDDD
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Chibipikagirl Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016  Student Digital Artist
*dies crying*
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Commander-Ludwig Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
EeeeeeeEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE



//dies internally
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QueenFluffButt Featured By Owner Edited Dec 23, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I have read a lot of  sad stories... but damn! This one made me tear up... BRAVO!
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Victoria-Walker925 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2015  Student Writer
*eyes tear up*
Don't do it... don't you do it... Don't give in... Stay-a happy... for-a Papa Feli... Pikachu Crying Plz Jake crying plz Frozen - Elsa Crying Icon Llama Emoji-08 (Crying) [V1] Romano (Cries) [V4] Oshawott cry plz Enough to Make a Grown Man Cry Cry Cry Cry Simba Run Cry Pikachu crying plz MLP Emote Twilight Sparkle Cry Sad You make Foxie Cry Rainbow Dash (cry) plz Panda Emoji-23 (Cry) [V2] Icon - 048 Hironi (Sad Cry) Kao Emoji-26 (Cry) [V2] Crying Death the Kid Emote Rarity (cry) plz Timon - Cry Mewtow crying plz France (Crying) [V3] crying meowth Italy Chibi (Crying) [V4] Crying Charizard crying Butterfree Pearl Emote 9 Itachi Crying Free Avatar Drama Queen Dolphin Inside Out - Saddness crying Mimori Crying Icon Haruka Saigusa (Crying) [V6] Oshawott Bawling Plz 
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AccarriahFang Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2015
This story got 500 favs
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KassidyofAsgard Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2015  Student General Artist
Why? ;~; *Dies of feels*

(Beautiful story, author-chan. Now don't mind me as I go cry in a cornor for a few hours)
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Wingedwolf12 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2015  Student Artist
Aw man I was replaced :( I like dis story though ^.^
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iYamTheGameDev Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
'I was replaced' XD
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Kuroi-Roze-Seikyo Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2015
I think it was a really good story, however, I personally dislike the fact that Feli named his new daughter (Y/N), because not only is the name already taken, even if reader IS dead, but also, it feels a bit like the baby is a replacement for reader. I know a lot would beg to differ, but this is just how I personally feel. Other than that, though, I thoroughly enjoyed this piece, and I can't wait to read more of your works! You are a truly gifted author! :)
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KawaiiKittenLover Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
THAT WAS NOT OKAY
WHY
DON'T DO THIS TO MY FEELS
S-so amazing...
Ti amo!!
C'est belle!
I like too many languages...
Great job, mon amie
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MabelHyuga75 Featured By Owner Edited Aug 6, 2015
Oww, your fanfic was amazing and very touching.
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hjsanchez82 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2015  Student Artist
*cries so hard* Oh my gosh I cried so hard! It gets me every time!! Wonderful story!~
...So sad...😭😢
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VinylSushi Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2015
T^T
In the end...He just replaced me...
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ChaosTheCat Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I was replaced too there there we shall be replacement buddies ;-;
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VinylSushi Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2015
;-;
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laurenbravo Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2015
This is beautiful. I have tears streaming down my face.Britney Spears Crying Yes 
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JadaIsMe Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
so sad but perfect!
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creepypeople Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
This is an amazing story, I found it very cute and touching, but Three are actually a few mista le in the sentences that Italy says:
Even thinking that "Mia bambina" is not fully wrong the correct version is "Bambina mia" because in Italian the noun come before the adjective
"Ti amo troppo" could be "Ti voglio bene anche io"
"Papa anche tu il mio tesoro ama" is fully incorrect. The right version is
"Anche tu sei il mio tesoro, il Papà ti vuole bene".
In Italian "I love you" could be traslated in Two ways
"ti voglio bene" who could be said by a father and a daughter or between two friends.
"ti amo" is more said between two lovers.
However, i loved this story!
Sorry for my English but i'm italian, so yeah!
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Otaku-Gawa Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
It is five in le Morning.  I'm worried my sobs will awaken my friend.  
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Piper15 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
This makes me cry every time!! Q~Q WHY!! Cry forever Miuna Crying Icon Chisaki Crying Icon Romano (Cries) [V4] 
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kittyXD9009 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
It's so touching!! I'm on the verge of tears!
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NeoniZigzagoon Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2015  Student Digital Artist
YAAAY I WANT DEATH :D
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KawaiiKittenLover Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Well then it's a good thing I don't mind death.
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Crying Mako Five Nights at Freddy's - Crying Child Jake crying plz SpongeBob (Cries) Big Fool Emoji-07 (Cry) [V2] Gross Sobbing 
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zebraqueen098 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
i must not cry because elliot will laugh *tries to not cry but explodes*
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YukiSatomi Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2015   Digital Artist
The feels hit me hard...-covers my face and tries not to let out a sob- GOOD STORY! 
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Nuttelaaddict44 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
So sad Sad dummy . I love it tho!
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GamerGirl62 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Almost made me cry. I can't really cry now, cuz my parents'll notice xD
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sunset30 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015
Italy Chibi (Crying) [V4] Asuna Crying Icon  So sad but really cute (reader-chan shal always be remaberd)
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goddesskid Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2015
WWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Killerdonut28 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015
Oh how could you
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coolgrl1234 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2015
Neko Emoji-14 (Cry) [V1] HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO MEEEEEEH!Cry run 
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EraOfTheChibi Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
I said I would hate you if I died after I finished the drawing. I hate you. Good job man.
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DarkRoseStayla1 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
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Enderchild Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
;-;

I'm fucking crying over here man.

From a short story.
U r both amazing and evil.
I hate you and I love you.
Eahggdbrjidnemske.
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theotakugurl Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2015  Student General Artist
THE FEELS!
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makaylea Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
my feels oh my tomatos !!!!
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coolcartoonanimefan Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015
WAAAAA TO MANY FEELS
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RaymanGirl6 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2015
DA FEELZ!  SOMEONE GET ME A BOX OF TISSUES!  HURRY!  THE TEARS ARE COMING!
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