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Dedicated to my adorable niece :D
Happy birthday kiddo~!
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It was raining and Ludwig was on his way home. He ran towards a waiting area with a small roof , giving him some protection from the rain. He sighed as he patiently waited for the rain to stop. The German sat down at one of the seats , drying himself a bit. Then not a minute later he heard light splashing sounds. A little girl , probably 7 or 8 scurried towards the waiting area. Her (h/c) hair  was wet from the rain. She panted slightly and sat down beside him.
She wore a (f/c) t-shirt and pants. She held a small notebook , which was wet from the rain.
A smile was plastered on her face , soflty humming a Nursery Rhyme. Her feet swinging back and forth. Then she turned her attention to Ludwig  ,who was blankly staring at the sky.
Ludwig then felt her eyes on him and looked at the young girl. The girl smiled "Quite the weather we're having huh?". Ludwig was surprised that a girl her age could talk like that.
He smiled and nodded. The little girl grinned , looking up at the sky. Ludwig cleared his throat
catching her attention. "Didnt you're mozher tell jou not to talk to strangers?". He asked firmly , however the girl didnt mind. "Yeah but you seem pretty nice!" she cheerfully said.
He smirked , slightly amused by her answer. "Vell vhat if I vasn't nice?" he again asked her.
"Dont worry!" The girl responded. She scooted closer to him and whispered "I have a knife.." she said smiling  like Jeff The Killer , making Ludwig a bit uncomfortable. Though she was just lying , the girl find it funny that he believed her , as she see fear written all over his face.  The German quickly thought of something to change the topic. "Vh-vhat's your name Mädchen?"
he finally said. "(f/n). (f/n) (l/n). What's yours?". Ludwig smiled.  "Ludwig Beilschmeidt". He says as he extended his hand. (f/n) shook his hand , very happy to meet a new friend. "Nice to meet you Ludwig Bells..shhm..uhh". Ludwig chuckled "You can just call me Ludwig." The girl nodded "You have a funny last name. I take you're not from here?" The German nodded.
"Ja , I'm from Germany."  (f/n) tilted her head "Germany?" she repeated. Ludwig nodded again "Ja. Germany."  
"Isn't that where all the Grammar Nazis come from?" (f/n) asked. Ludwig raised an eyebrow. "Was?"
"Nothing."  the girl pulled a blank expression. Ludwig stared at her for a second then shaking his head a bit. "How old are you?" he asked breaking the silence. (f/n) showed 7 of her fingers , indicating she is 7 years old. "Oh..so you're only seven." (f/n) nodded "How bout you? How old are you?". Ludwig looked at her with a WTF face. He sighed "Vell I'm so old you're brain vill explode." (f/n) looked at him and suddenly smiled "COOL!". The German
chuckled again. "Do you have a brother?" she asks. Ludwig nodded "Ja , I do. He's name his Gilbert."  
"I see.." (f/n) says. "Do you have a girlfriend?" she asked again. Ludwig's face flushed pure red. "Uhh..".  The girl looked at him with anticipation. "I..razher not talk about it." he replied averting his eye contact from her. (f/n) giggled "Alright. I'm sorry." Ludwig smirked. "You are really nice." she whispers , looking at the sky. Ludwig felt a bit of warmth from her words. They both notice the rain has stopped , the sun peeping out of the clouds. "Hm. Looks like zhe rain has stopped." he said as he stood up. (f/n) nodded and stood up as well. She looked up to Ludwig , who was smiling at her. "I should be going now , my mom is probably looking for me." (f/n) said. "Ja I think so too. You better get going zhen , be careful on your vay home." (f/n) nodded "Okay. You be careful too." Ludwig chuckled and lightly patted her head.  "We'll see each other again right?" she excitingly asked. "Of course." Ludwig says.
(f/n) fist pumped and began running at the opposite direction. She stopped only to wave goodbye to her new friend. Ludwig smiled and waved back. He then started walking to his house , looking back to see (f/n) running along the sidewalk until she is no longer seen. Ludwig chuckled 'Vhat a nice girl..' he thought as he walked home , smiling like there's no tomorrow.  He just made a little friend.
I based Reader-chan's personality off my niece. She is like that ^^ and she really asked a German friend of mine if Grammar Nazis came from Germany XD Man..
And yes she has this creepy smile of hers that makes my hair stand up. O.O Jeez..

Yeah so I hope you like this short story. I cant get enough of these Child!Reader inserts! Why?!?! D: They are just so :iconitssofluffyplz: and cute :3

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The line "Germany? Isnt that where all the Grammar Nazis come from?" (c) My niece , Cyrie :3
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aprilanddtk Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
It`s so cute and fluffy i had to take breaks from reading it i was fangirling so hard
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coolgrl1234 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2015
"Isn't that where all the Grammar Nazis come from?" I laughed really hard and now my side hurts! Now my cat and Ludwig have something in common they both have WTF faces at the moment! XD
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anime-lover310 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2015
This- this is too cute~ *explodes*
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Side-Of-Angels Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
so cute *head explodes and blood is a rainbow*
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ToLovePasta Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2014
THAT WAS THE CUTEST MOST ADORABLE STORY EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!##
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Missem111003 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Doitsu is so hilarious when he is uncomfortable.
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jliscool2013 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014  Student General Artist
Isn't that where all Grammar nazis come from?..... PFFFFFFFTTTTT!!!!! * clears throat* love it. XD
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cutekiller0116 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014
Nice way to throw Jeff the killer in there
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kittyninja1212 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014
"Vell I'm so old you're brain vill explode."
"Nice to meet you Ludwig Bells..shhm..uhh"
"Isn't that where all the Grammar Nazis come from?"
Those lines made me lmfao XD
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CuppyCakessss Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Student Artist
Omfg... I kept thinking in my head: " Doitsu is a PEEEDOOO~!" And then I asked my self: 'what is wrong with me' Oh yess 
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ButterscotchRipple77 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Student Artist
"Isn't that where all the grammar nazis are from?"
................ *le dead*
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Vietnamcouples214 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Student Artist
"Nice to meet you Ludwig Bells..shhm..uhh"
I started doing it myself and started laughing XD
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When u put Jeff The Killer that made my day i fell of the chair!!! XD Love the story to!!!
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Japan343 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014
Hahaha~! This story made my day~!!
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AwsomeSause4Life Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
 "I have a knife.." she said smiling  like Jeff The Killer
haha you made my day!!! and I'm actually part German from my grandpa's side and he's a HUGE grammar Nazi
Roflzberries Mwahahahahahahaha!  
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Fluffymittenzxx Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014
cloudeweplz 
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LeRPG Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014
-holds on the child me- yes child.....they come from Germany.....except Ludwig cause he's fucking awesome.....oreos child......oreos....
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BluejayBlaze Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
"Mr. Ludwig, do you have a girlfriend?"
"Nein, I have an Italy."
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Howl-Of-Caspian Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014
Oh my gosh you just made my day
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shenanigami26 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
mine too
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Bex-the-otaku Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014
Jeff the Killer smile... that is soo totally what I do to scare people
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0FrostFromFairyTail0 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014
DOISU DOISU u so funny und cute!!!! I dies from adorable-ness💝❤️💛💙💜💚💖💞💘💗💕💓
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konokokurosaki Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
:iconkawaiiplz: DESU~~~~~~~~~~<3 ZOMG YOADDED JEFF THE KILLER -nosebleeds thinking of him-
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Inugirl115 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
You should make a chapter where he sees her again but she doesn't actually have a family and that's why she acts so mature
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Evee550 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww I luv u to Germany!
 
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sissynick Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I lived in Germany all my life until I was 9. XD So this story wouldn't be to efficient.  Oh well, it's for entertainment.
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ILoveDeaththeKid13 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Student Writer
>w< i LOVE IT! Jeff the Killer :icongotosleepplz:   AWESOME!
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HazelNaughty Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Im glad you did!
Yesh Jeff is awesome even though he makes me crap my pants XD
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ILoveDeaththeKid13 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Student Writer
Really XD XD 
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Harrisyn15 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Student Filmographer
awwwwwwwwwwiloveit!
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HazelNaughty Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :D
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himaruyes Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
When I was 8 I visited Germany, and I couldn't help but be afraid that Hitler would come out form somewhere and kill me. But I just had heard about him, so I didn't know how he looked like. So a German man told my mom I was cute but I didn't understand shit so I kicked him in the nuts scared he was going to take my mom with him.

I fell off my mom's arms when I was a baby.

Anyway, this is so cute :33
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Inugirl115 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
That's awesome
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SpikeyMacksy Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013
don't qorry
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HazelNaughty Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for sharing your interesting experience! I think I felt the same way when I visited Germany as well (I was 10 at that time , I went to Stockholm to visit my cousins who were staying there) I cant stop shaking that feeling that I was being watch by some Nazis or something like that so I kept on clutching onto my dad's arm and never let go. 


Aww and thank you , I'm glad you liked it. :D
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J3LLYSH3Y Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
<3 I LOVE IT~!
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HazelNaughty Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :3
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Pucca2000 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, this is so cute. :)
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HazelNaughty Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awww thanks dearie ^^ :3
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Pucca2000 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome.
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Djcrazybanana Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013
It's so adorable and funny nice job
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HazelNaughty Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :D
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Djcrazybanana Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013
np
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Vegetafan72 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Child! Reader inserterts are the best! This was so cute!
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HazelNaughty Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes , yes they are! :3 and thank you :D
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Vegetafan72 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome!
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mangagrrlluv Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
"Isn't that where all the Grammar Nazis come from?"

I DIED LAUGHING
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HazelNaughty Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD yeah me too. I love my niece :3
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germanyalyssa Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I-I- it's so darn cute!
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HazelNaughty Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aww thanks dear :3
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